TL;DR below.Dear Entrepreneur,today I'd like to take a few minutes of your time, but first I'd like to say:Kudos to you for being among the people going after their entrepreneurial dreams. I tried that too, and I failed miserably due to underestimating the vast scale of necessary willpower to push through a dozen brand new issues on a daily basis. For now - I am sticking with working for entrepreneurs, instead of being one.Today I invite you to look at what I did for your kind and give me your thoughts.Yes, this is a feedback request. Might not be well suited in this subreddit, but you are who I need, so I'm giving it a shot here as well.Anyways: https://ift.tt/3kqVv0k - is an entrepreneur like you, and was my client. Please visit his website and tell me what feeling you get about the person as well as his new proprietary service that he's pushing - within 5-15 seconds upon landing (or however long the site keeps you there).My involvement? I was responsible for everything you think and feel (as a visitor) when you open that website. I structured and written much of the homepage copy, and all of the 'Services' page copy.I'd like to get your thoughts behind presenting my client because I am, as always, trying to learn and grow. I do not work with this client anymore, but he's made such a good impression on me as an honest, healthy-thinking and genuine human being that he is, that I am still interested in improving his online presence, even though we're off contract at the moment.With enough valuable feedback, I plan on sending key points to him to keep in mind and potentially change.TL;DR:What is this post: As a copywriter, I helped an entrepreneur, a small business consultant present himself and his new proprietary service (sales audit).What do I want from you: I'd like to take a few minutes of your time to tell me how I presented my client on his website.What's in it for you? Absolutely nothing. Perhaps some industry insight if you're in the same niche... Completely understand and expect this post to flop. But I gotta start somewhere.Disclaimer: I now realize this might look like a promotion of my services to some. Hence I've deleted the part where I mentioned my credentials and website to help you gauge me before looking at my work.On top of that, and to help mods or anyone else understand my motives here: Please do not PM me unless wanting to provide feedback in private. That said, I urge you to post in the comments sections so others can perhaps benefit from this post in some way as well, e.g. other copywriters.I will not respond to job offers in comments or PM. This is purely out of love and care for someone I worked for. Thank you, and good luck pushing forward with your dreams! see hubwealthy.com/wealthy
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