Hi all,I am writing an email to my dream mentor(s) that offered to mentor me a couple of years ago. It is a man and his wife and they are both very successful entrepreneurs in Southern California. They welcomed me into their home like a daughter and I would like to rekindle that relationship with their family and receive any career/life guidance they are willing to offer. Any help revising would be greatly appreciated. Note: "______" and "(WORD)" indicates personal information I have omitted for privacy. I have included my draft (#1) and a copy of my draft that was revised by my friend (#2). Also, I have spent the night in their guest house after a very private small party at their house, so the line about meeting at their house should not be weird to them. Please see below.Thank you very much!!!----------------------------------------------------------------------------(#1)Subject Line: Hello, from Adam ______’s friend (MY NAME)Subject Line: Adam __________’s friend (MY NAME) -- Hello!Hi ________,My name is _______________and I am Adam _____’s friend. I first met you at your house in (CITY) for your Halloween party and in (LOCATION) when you were there to attend a wedding. Thank you again for your hospitality! You are truly an all-around incredible person and I am so incredibly grateful to Adam for introducing me to you, (WIFE'S NAME), and your team.When I spoke with you in Palm Springs, you mentioned that I should reach out to (WIFE'S NAME). I reached out a while ago via email, but I did not hear back -- I’m sure it just fell through the cracks. I’m sure you are both very busy, and any time you could manage to find for me I would greatly appreciate it. Would you be available any time this coming week? I live in Orange County now, so I’d be happy to meet in (CITY) for coffee, at your house, or wherever is most convenient for you.Thank you!Best regards,OR.....................................................................................................(#2)Subject Line: Adam ____’s friend _________ -- Hello!Hi _______,I hope you are doing well! My name is ______ and I am Adam _______’s friend. I first met you at your house in (CITY) for your Halloween party and again in Palm Springs when you were all there to attend a wedding. Your incredible hospitality has stuck with me to this day, and has driven me to write this email.When we spoke in Palm Springs, you mentioned that I should reach out to _________. I reached out via email, but I did not hear back -- I’m sure it just fell through the cracks. I’m sure you are both very busy, and any time you could manage to find for me I would greatly appreciate it. Would you be available any time this coming week? I live in Orange County now, so I’d be happy to meet in (CITY) for coffee, at your house, or wherever is most convenient for you.Thank you!Best regards, see hubwealthy.com/wealthy
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